the diagram below shows the process of producing raisins from grapes. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The diagram illustrates the process involved in the production of
raisons
from grapes. It is evident that the procedure encompasses multiple stages to convert fresh fruits into dried raisins.
Correct your spelling
raisins
First,
the grapes are harvested. Then
, it takes almost 2 to 3 weeks for grapes to dried. Next,
they are loaded onto trucks and transformed to the factory. After the remained leaves and branches are eliminated, raisins are washed by the washer. Before packaging
they are sorted by size. Add a comma
packaging,
Finally
, They
smaller packages are distributed to the grocery stores and the larger ones are transformed Correct your spelling
The
to
bakeries. Some will be exported to other countries.Change preposition
into
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