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The chart below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by Canada, UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. write 150 words.

The chart below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by Canada, UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. write 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates four nations: Canada, the UK, the USA, and Germany imported
tea
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 and
coffee
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 in 2007, measured in
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, three countries,
such
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 as Canada, the US, and Germany imported more
coffee
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 products,
while
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 the UK imported
tea
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 products the most. As can be seen, Canada bought
coffee
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 at 20000
tonnes
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 and
tea
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 at roughly 40000
tonnes
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. The US witnessed the number of
coffee
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 imported was higher than
tea
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, at 40000
tonnes
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 and at just above 20000
tonnes
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.
By contrast
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, the UK experienced importing a significant amount of
tea
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 80000
tonnes
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,
whereas
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coffee
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 fell to 30000
tonnes
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.
Furthermore
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,
tea
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 was imported by Germany, at 40000
tonnes
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 and slightly increased in
Coffee
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 by 50000.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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