The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makecomparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makecomparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the quantities of good transported in the UK via four different modes between 1974 and 2002. Total quantity of goods
together with
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all modes of
transport
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except rail experienced significant growth during the period. Out of the four modes, road
transport
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kept leading the way: it rose slowly from 70
million
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tonnes
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in 1974 to around 80 in the early 1990s, and
then
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stayed flat for a few years before jumping to almost 100 in the
end
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. Water
transport
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also
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experienced growth
although
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in a quite different pattern: it stayed at 40
million
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tonnes
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for a few years in the beginning, soared to almost 60, and
then
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stayed stable for a decade until the early 1990s; after that, water
transport
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dipped slightly before started climbing in 1999, reaching up to over 60 in the
end
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.
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but not the least, pipeline grew from almost nonexistence to above 20
million
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tonnes
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, though still the lowest, in the
end
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. Rail started at the same level as water
transport
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but went in the opposite direction. It kept going down and hit a bottom of around 25
million
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tonnes
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in 1995, and
then
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bounced back to slightly above 40 in the
end
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, million, tonnes, end with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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