Task 1: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate the specific industrial zone in the
town
of
Norbiton
, and how it changed after some development plans in the future.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the industrial
area
in the
town
of
Norbiton
witnesses
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radical changes with the most noticeable being the addition of some new housing facilities. Looking at the map at
the
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present, there is a large
roudabout
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roundabout
at the centre of an industrial
area
in the
town
of
Norbiton
and
this
also
has eight
factories
.
Beside
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that, the main road
constructed
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is constructed
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in
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on
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the south side of
this
location and the extra road is located between some
factories
near the
roadabout
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roundabout
road about
. In the north, a river runs from west to east with farmland situated to its north.
According to
the proposed plans,
this
area
have
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the disappearance of many
factories
.
In addition
, there is a new
roadabout
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roundabout
road about
will be built in the southside.
Moreover
, around the roundabout new houses and some shops will be built to replace the
factories
,
while
a medical center will be constructed to the southeast. It
also
can be seen that the
town
of
Norbiton
is going to add some new facilities including a school and a playground on the right side. In the north,
this
zone will be used to construct
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an accomdation
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accomdation
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accommodation
area
and a bridge which will
use
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to access
to
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this
new residential
area
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, norbiton, area, factories with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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