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The table shows data about the average income for one person in dollars, across two different age groups: under 18 and over 60, as well as the percentage of the poor population in three states in the US, namely California, Utah, and Florida

The table shows data about the average income for one person in dollars, across two different age groups: under 18 and over 60, as well as the percentage of the poor population in three states in the US, namely California, Utah, and Florida
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The provided table gives information about the proportion of salary for each employee, the ratio of poverty, and the percentage of children and elderly in three regions of the United States including
California
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,
Utah
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 and Florida.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the highest percentage of children who are under 18 years
and
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old and
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 the lowest
number
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 of old adults who are above 60 are in
Utah
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. An American who lives in
California
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 has the highest amount of income. Meanwhile, people who live in
Utah
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 have the lowest wages.
To begin
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 with, in
Utah
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, the
number
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 of teenagers and children is the greatest of others at 28%. Followed by
California
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 and Florida at 17% and 16% respectively.
However
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,
Utah
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 records the lowest
number
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 of elderly people at 8 per cent,
while
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 Florida sits at the top with 23%. The poverty rate reaches the highest level at 16% in
California
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, even though it has the greatest value of income at $ 230000.
On the other hand
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,
Utah
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 has the lowest
number
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 of poor people at 9%,
while
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 it has the lowest salary at $17,000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words california, utah, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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