The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. ‘Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provides information about the stages involved in the
cement
-making process and how cement
is used for building.
Overall
, in cement
production, the process consists of six stages, beginning with limestone and ending with bags. Concrete production includes 5 stages, beginning with cement
and ending with a concrete mixer.
First of all, limestone and clay are crushed and this
will be powder. Afterwards, the powder is mixed thoroughly before it is sent to a rotating heater. Having been heated, the resulting mixture is then
ground and packed into bags of ready-to-use cement
.
As for producing concrete, the ingredients are cement
, water, sand and gravel. It starts using cement
less than a fifth, while
water is one in ten. Subsequently
, sand was used for a quarter and a half of the concrete consisting of small stones. Finally
, all of the production concrete is mixed and ready to use.Submitted by mamashukuruvbobur31 on
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