The table below shows the participation of people over 15 in selected sports and physical recreation activities by gender in Australia during the period 2011-12.
The table compares data about male and female involvement in the selection of
activities
in Australia in 2011 and 2012.
Overall
, there are some unnoticeable differences in the proportion of male and female involvement in the selected activities
, where males were less likely than females to take part in sporting activities
.
The most popular activity for both genders was walking for exercise, where the percentage
of women
was twice more
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men
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of men
By contrast
, yoga was the least popular activity overall
. Just around 3% of women
did yoga, while
no men
.
Netball saw a similar Add a missing verb
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percentage
of genders.
The kinds of activities
where women
are less liked than men
are golf,football and basketball.A percentage
of men
around 2,8% and 4,8% played basketball and football,while
no women
played. However
, the percentage
of men
who played gold was 8,2%.
A smaller percentage
of males than females went swimming or diving, although
fitness and gym are more popular for women
instead
of men
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