The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps show the changes in Stokeford village from 1930 to 2010. In 1930, the town consisted of a few farmlands located on both sides of the city. Stokeford
also
had the river stroke that flowed through the city and the bridge on the top of the map. In the
center
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of the town, there were five main buildings including the gardens, the large house, the primary school, the post office, and the shops. The village was basic and had just a few houses alongside a road.
However
, in 2010, the farmlands were replaced by various houses, and the shops were removed.
Accordingly
, the primary school was extended to be larger, assumingly from the increase of houses and children. The large house, which was centralized on the map, was renovated into
the
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retirement home.
Lastly
, the post office was maintained to be the same as eighty years ago. To summarise, there were many adjustments in Stokeford, especially the expansion of home construction in the modern day. Because of human growth and adapting
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, the town had to facilitate various infrastructures
such
as bigger schools,
the
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retirement home for the
aging
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society, and so on.
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  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
  • main features
  • overview
  • changes
  • similarities
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