The following two pie charts display the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given is a bar chart illustrating the manufacture and
consumption
of electricity in ten nations in 2014.
Overall
, it is apparent from information
supplied that the rate of Correct article usage
the information
production
energy
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of energy
dominated
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is dominated
than
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by
consumption
in all countries, except Germany.
Firstly
, as is presented in a graph, China (production
5,398 billion
kWh
, consumption
5,322 billion
kWh
) and the United States ( production
4,099 billion
kWh
, 3,866 billion
consumption
) both had a much higher performance than the other eight republics. In third place, in energy producing
rank is Russia with equal Add a hyphen
energy-producing
production
1,057
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of 1,057
billion
kWh
and consumption
1,038
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of 1,038
billion
kWh
numbers. Meanwhile, 936,2 and 856,7 kWh
showed Japan in the illustration. Also
, India - the fifth top state with 871 kWh
of power producing and 698,8 of used kilowatt.
Secondly
, as a pictorial suggests 618,9 and 499,9 kWh
presented Canada in 2014. The seventh civilization - France had 561,2 kWh
production
, 462,9
of making Correct word choice
and 462,9
energy
. Brazil had
a little behind Verb problem
was
from
France in Change preposition
apply
production
(530,7 of dynamism, 455,8 in using hydro).
Before the last
one is
Germany which had differences Correct your spelling
in
that
othersChange preposition
from
,
when producing Remove the comma
apply
energy
was 526,6 kWh
, expending of that was 582,5 kWh
. The last
one is Correct article usage
the Korea
Korea
Republic 485,1 Correct your spelling
Korean
kWh
in production
and 449,5 in consumption
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