The tourist industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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fifty years, the

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industry

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has increased sharply and there are few places which are

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doesn't always

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the

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which

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visit. I completely disagree with

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point of view because the

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industry

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benefits the

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of the

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tourism

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countries

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and they help the

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to contact with other

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. To start with, the first reason is that the

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industry

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insreases

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increases

the

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of the

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countries

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. To explain, as the number of

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to

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countries

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increases, the

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of those regions increases because the

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tourist

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must rent hotels and buy food.

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,

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share photos of the

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they visit, which helps the country receive a large number of visitors and the

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to increase.

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, the second reason is that communication between

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and

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benefits

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in learning about new

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and how to communicate with them. To clarify, most

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tourists

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like to talk with the people who live in those

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, which helps the

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learn

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countries

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and

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.

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, when the

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talks to someone living in that country, it will help the person to know a new country, which helps him learn a new language or traditions.

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, I believe that the

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industry

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is the most important cause of the

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economy

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of the

countries

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and learning new

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.