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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
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The given line graph illustrates various sources that
determinates
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determine
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air
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 pollution in the UK between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
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, all of the given sources fluctuated over
years
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the years
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,
while
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 the data
of
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on
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 transport
pollutants
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stay
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stayed
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 static in the period displayed. It can be seen that the total of
air
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pollutants
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 hit its peak in 1990 and
decrease
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decreased
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significant
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significantly
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 over time.
Whereas
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, the
households
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household
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pollutants
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is being
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are
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 in the
last
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 position in the class. The industry field
produce
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produced
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 the most
air
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pollutants
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 in 1990 hitting almost 6 million tonnes and had
significant
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significantly
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 decreased to 2
millions
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million
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 tonnes in 2005.
In addition
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, the households hit in 2005 the
bottow
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bottom
 of the graph having 0 million tonnes of
air
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pollutants
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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