The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the average income earned by five occupations, which are Police, Nurse, Teacher, Firefighter and Underground Driver, and by two working period groups of starting and after three years. The table illustrates the weekly average working
hours
for the five occupations mentioned above.
Overall
, it is clear that
there is no significant growth between working started and working over three years amount
all five careers. And both teachers and firefighters see the most hours
of working over a week.
According to
the bar chart, we can
know that underground drivers have the highest salary whether when they just started work or after three years with the Verb problem
apply
amount
of around 50000, and nurses earn the least with amount
Correct article usage
an amount
approximately
18000. The second Change preposition
of approximately
amount
of salary belonged to firefighters, about 40000 per year, followed by teachers and police with amounts around 30000 and 20000 respectively.
When it comes to working hours
, underground drivers see the least one per week, which means this
group earn the most money with the least working hours
. Besides
, nursing and police are mostly reaching the average working hours
, around 40 per week. In addition
, teachers and firefighters have the most working loads with 55 hours
weekly, which is dramatically over the average working hours
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