The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph and pie chart
illustrates
information about migration and the Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrate
reason
why they came to the UK
between 2000 and 2008.
Overall
, most of them choose to stay up to two years
in the UK
as the number of immigrants
has increase
over the Change the verb form
increased
years
, hitting its peak in 2008 having 250 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
immigrants
, while
the people who choose to stay for 4 years
or even more have stayed static over the period in the class, this
category contains 150 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
immigrants
. Whereas
,
the people who choose to stay up to 2 or 4 Remove the comma
apply
years
have the lowest rankings in the class,however
, they showed a slightly
increase between the Change the adverb
slight
years
2007 and 2008 which hit around 100 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
immigrants
.
The immigrants
stated the reason
why they came in
the Change preposition
to
UK
was for work, mostly
of them Correct your spelling
most
choose
the same Wrong verb form
chose
reason
, which is the most popular amongst them, having the highest proportion in the pie chart which is 36%, another reason
why immigrants
come here is because of studies, as 32% of immigrants
come in the UK
to study. Additionally
, 16% of immigrants
stated they come
to see their families or even join them, Wrong verb form
came
while
other
had not given an exact Fix the agreement mistake
others
reason
why they came in
the Change preposition
to
UK
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