The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate one city, which will be changed, at two various times( Now and in the future).
Overall
, it is crucial that people who will have been living in
this
area will be able to connect to other sections of the region comfortably
due to
the fact that the number of roads
also
will increase;
moreover
, most people can work in the industry.
According to
the pictures, the A2 road, Gas station, and town centre will be absolutely the same as now;
furthermore
, railway and residential areas will have the same zone as in the past but they will have some alternatives inasmuch as we can see the build-up area ring road will have less sector than the past;
additionally
, near the gas station on the railway, it will be having a square which will be larger than A2 roundabout. The graph shows the town centre in the future will be connected to A2 by a new road that name will be A4 and the Airfield will be replaced by an Industrial estate and
this
district will be connected to Railway.
In addition
,
this
region will have a big highway that will start from the Town centre to out it.
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