The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
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The given graph shows
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information on the
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of
people
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who took part in different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
Overall
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, the
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of
people
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who participated in film clubs always led from 2000 to 2020. From 2000 to 2010, the
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of participants in film clubs decreased slightly, which was above 60
people
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in 2000, 60
people
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in 2005 and about 57
people
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in 2010.
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period,
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both musical performances and table tennis increased. In table tennis, the
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rose from about 16 to 20 between 2000 and 2005 and
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it stayed at 20 in 2010. In musical performances, it did not change from 2000 to 2005
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rose from o to about 12 in 2010. From 2010 to 2020, the
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of participants in film clubs, table tennis and musical performances grew up , reaching about 68, 57, and 19
people
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respectively in 2020. In martial arts, there was always fluctuation, there were about 36, 32, 37, 33, and 34
people
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every five years from 2000 to 2020.
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, in amateur dramatics, the
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increased slightly from approximately 26 to 28 between 2000 to 2005
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reduced remarkably and reached 7 in 2020
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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