The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
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The given graph shows
the
information on the Correct article usage
apply
number
of Use synonyms
people
who took part in different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
who participated in film clubs always led from 2000 to 2020.
From 2000 to 2010, the Use synonyms
number
of participants in film clubs decreased slightly, which was above 60 Use synonyms
people
in 2000, 60 Use synonyms
people
in 2005 and about 57 Use synonyms
people
in 2010. Use synonyms
In contrast
, in Linking Words
this
period,Linking Words
it
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apply
of
both musical performances and table tennis increased. In table tennis, the Change preposition
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number
rose from about 16 to 20 between 2000 and 2005 and Use synonyms
then
it stayed at 20 in 2010. In musical performances, it did not change from 2000 to 2005 Linking Words
then
rose from o to about 12 in 2010. From 2010 to 2020, the Linking Words
number
of participants in film clubs, table tennis and musical performances grew up , reaching about 68, 57, and 19 Use synonyms
people
respectively in 2020. In martial arts, there was always fluctuation, there were about 36, 32, 37, 33, and 34 Use synonyms
people
every five years from 2000 to 2020. Use synonyms
Besides
, in amateur dramatics, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
increased slightly from approximately 26 to 28 between 2000 to 2005 Use synonyms
then
reduced remarkably and reached 7 in 2020Linking Words
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