The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The two maps illustrate how the Ryemouth village was developed from 1995 to the present day. After analysis, it is clearly mentioned that, toward the eastern direction, there was huge farmland for farmers to grow crops in 1995, but now it has turned into a golf pitch, making a recreational activity for residents. In the meantime, a forest park, which was just next to the farmland, was substituted into two tennis courts.
Similarly
, at present, an addition of a car park is added adjacent to the hotel building.
However
, the number of different shops was changed into restaurants.
Furthermore
, in the year 1995, there used to be a fish market quite close to the sea which now transformed into small mini apartments.
Additionally
, the fish port was demolished
while
housing areas for individuals
are
Wrong verb form
were
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reduced at the current time,
as a result
, making a path for a road in the west direction.
In contrast
, the cafe
remains
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has remained
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the same throughout the years.
Overall
, it is vividly manifested that there were dramatic changes in the village area of Ryemouth, starting from the fish market, farmland, and shops which were replaced with apartments, a golf area, and restaurants
at the end
.
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