The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart given illustrates the

proportion

of folks who ate 5 times per day fruits and vegetables in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

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,

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women are the leaders of the class as they dominated all over the years having the highest rankings and hitting

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peak in 2006.

While

the

proportion

of both men and

children

stayed static from 2001 to 2003 and after

that

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the percentage started to increase.

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, the category of men hit their highest rankings between the years 2006 and 2007. The

proportion

of women who ate fruits and vegetables stayed high all over the period,

however

, in 2006 the percentage of women who ate

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hit around 35% and after

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the

proportion

fluctuated around 30% in 2008 , but still being in the first position.

While

children

eat most vegetables and fruits in 2007 having over 25% and the same goes for the men category. In

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contrast, the

proportion

of

children

who ate

healthy

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between the years 2001, 2002 and respectively 2003

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the same having over 10%,

however

, in 2004 , the percentage of

children

showed a significant rise to over 15%