The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates
UK's
Correct article usage
the UK's
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production
levels of
petroleum
, coal and natural gas between 1981 and 2000.
Overall
,
petroleum
has the highest
production
between 1981 and 2000.
On the other hand
, coal had the lowest
production
rate in 2000. In 1981,
petroleum
had the highest
production
level with approximately 90
million
tonnes
generated.
Creation
Correct article usage
The creation
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of
this
fuel has been steadily increasing,
however
, there was a significant decrease in the
production
of
petroleum
around 1990.
After
this
decline, manufacturing
petroleum
Change preposition
of petroleum
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is steadily increasing with a peak of approximately 145
million
tonnes
produced around 1999 and has remained the highest produced fuel in 2000. The creation of natural gas has been on a steady increase since 1981 with almost 40
million
tonnes
and has peaked around 2000 with a little over 100
million
tonnes
of oil produced.
On the contrary
, coal
has
Wrong verb form
had
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80
million
tonnes
manufactured in 1981 but had a sharp decline in
it
Correct pronoun usage
its
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production
around 1982 with only less than 40
million
tonnes
created.
After
this
decline, it steadily
increasing
Wrong verb form
increased
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to 60
million
tonnes
produced in 1986. It had
plateaud
Correct your spelling
plateaued
plateau
until 1989 when
production
slowly
decreases
Wrong verb form
decreased
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and around 2000's
it's
Replace the word
its
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production
was at its lowest with only around 35
million
tonnes
produced.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "after this".
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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