The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates
UK's
Correct article usage
the UK's
production
levels of petroleum
, coal and natural gas between 1981 and 2000. Overall
, petroleum
has the highest production
between 1981 and 2000. On the other hand
, coal had the lowest production
rate in 2000.
In 1981, petroleum
had the highest production
level with approximately 90 million
tonnes
generated. Creation
of Correct article usage
The creation
this
fuel has been steadily increasing, however
, there was a significant decrease in the production
of petroleum
around 1990. After
this
decline, manufacturing petroleum
is steadily increasing with a peak of approximately 145 Change preposition
of petroleum
million
tonnes
produced around 1999 and has remained the highest produced fuel in 2000.
The creation of natural gas has been on a steady increase since 1981 with almost 40 million
tonnes
and has peaked around 2000 with a little over 100 million
tonnes
of oil produced. On the contrary
, coal has
80 Wrong verb form
had
million
tonnes
manufactured in 1981 but had a sharp decline in it
Correct pronoun usage
its
production
around 1982 with only less than 40 million
tonnes
created. After
this
decline, it steadily increasing
to 60 Wrong verb form
increased
million
tonnes
produced in 1986. It had plateaud
until 1989 when Correct your spelling
plateaued
plateau
production
slowly decreases
and around 2000's Wrong verb form
decreased
it's
Replace the word
its
production
was at its lowest with only around 35 million
tonnes
produced.Submitted by estillorericamae on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.
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