You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth  between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The map gives information about changes
of
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in
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Ryemouth
from 1995 to now.
Overall
,
Ryemouth
did not
has experienced
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experience
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significant differences. At first glance, we can say that the village had had a huge forest park and farmland previously,
whereas
, today
Ryemouth
have a new tennis court and golf
area
instead
of
thats
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that
.
Also
, it had
seaport
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a seaport
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in the year 1995 when it comes
to
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apply
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today it does not have a new venue
furthermore
,
fish
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a fish
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market and cafe
who
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apply
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were built in 1995,
however
they
was
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were
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removed
present
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apply
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because
restaurant
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a restaurant
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and hotel were constructed.
Besides
, all housing
area
was located
the
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in the
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western of the
Ryemouth
in 1995
also
they
are
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remaing
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remain
nowadays in the sample location.
Finally
, we can observe that local residents of
Ryemouth
do not have sufficient green
area
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areas
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and they could find a park
are
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area
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for their vehicles , today the
Ryemouth
residents have a park
area
which is located near the hotel.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ryemouth, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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