The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart illustrates the proportions of tourists in England who visited variable places.

Overall

, the

percentages

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percentage

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of people who went to

pavilion

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the pavilion

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and pier increased significantly.

In contrast

with art gallery and festival

tourists'

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tourists

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proportions which decreased over the period. The number of people who visited

pavilion

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the pavilion

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were

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just under 25% in 1980 and it rocketed up sharply to just under 50% in 1995.

Then

, it went down steadily until it reached just above 30% in 2010. Art gallery visitors started the period at nearly 24% and climbed up to approximately 37% in 1985.

Then

, it dropped consistently year on year until it reached nearly 7% in 2010. The proportion of individuals who went to Brighton's pier

were

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just 10% and it fluctuated between nearly under 10% and approximately under 15% until 2000 before it rose dramatically to nearly 23% in 2010. The rate of

festival's

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festival

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visitors began at 30% and fluctuated between 30% and 25% until 2000

where

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it remained relatively stable for ten years.