The bar chart compares the percentage of people with scientific qualifications in Malaysia and Singapore.

The bar chart compares the percentage of people with scientific qualifications in Malaysia and Singapore.
The bar graph shows the percentages of individuals with different education levels of science, including master's, bachelor's, high school, and none, in two different nations.
Overall
, in
Malaysia
, there is a higher prevalence of residents with weaker qualifications,
whereas
in Singapore, there is a greater concentration of highly qualified residents. The most popular option in
Malaysia
is to drop out of school earlier and start a side job
as well as
in Singapore where the proportion of people without a science degree is 10 per cent less in comparison with
Malaysia
, in fact, half of the whole population in both countries choose
this
option.
Furthermore
, the school leaving exams rate is exactly similar to the no qualification graph, but it decreased by 30 per cent from both states.
On the other hand
, Singapore is half a per cent ahead of
Malaysia
in bachelor's degrees;
however
, the percentage plummeted drastically, 20% and 10% respectively. The next result is surprising, a tie happened in master's degrees among both powers, slightly above 2 percent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • scientific qualifications
  • educational focus
  • governmental policies
  • science and technology education
  • industrially driven demand
  • cultural attitudes
  • international collaborations
  • scholarships
  • disparities
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