Science is more useful than human judgement in stopping crime. To what extent do you agree?
Some individuals believe that
Science
is more beneficial than human judgement
in criminal Correct your spelling
judgment
cases
. I partly agree with that because If there are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
DNA
evidences
Change the wording
evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
science
may solve the whole crime
. However
, sometimes there is no evidence
and we should trust the Judge's decision.
Science
might be beneficial for stopping crimes. It provides us real
Change preposition
with real
proof
in
that Change preposition
of
crime
case
. For instance
, If there is no evidence
such
as video
record or some witness and Correct article usage
a video
also
we just have a
hair of somebody. When they check the Correct article usage
the
DNA
of hair, they may find the criminal with just a hair. However
, If we find two different hairs in crime
area and we know that there is one criminal, scientific checks cannot be helpful for us because we have to ask both of these suspects. Correct article usage
a crime
Hence
, Science
can be beneficial If there is an
Remove the article
evidence
a piece of evidence
a shred of evidence
evidence
with DNA
checks. Nevertheless
, If we have two or more proof
it cannot solve the whole crime
.
On the other hand
, Sometimes we need to
human Change preposition
apply
judgement
in Correct your spelling
judgment
cases
. If there are some problems such
as lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
evidence
or lack of witness
. Somebody Fix the agreement mistake
witnesses
have
to ask suspects some Change the verb form
has
psyhclogical
questions to solve Correct your spelling
psychological
crime
.Add an article
the crime
a crime
For example
, Recently ın my neighborhood there was a case
about
robbery. Change preposition
of
However
, It happened in
night Change preposition
at
due to
Change preposition
apply
that
nobody saw the criminal. They have two or three suspects and they have to ask them questions Correct word choice
and
such
as where were you at that time. In the end
some of the Add a comma
end,
suspect
Change to a plural noun
suspects
gives
up and Wrong verb form
gave
explain
Wrong verb form
explained
his
whole robbery and he Change the word
the
punished
Add a missing verb
is punished
to
3 years. Change preposition
with
Therefore
, If we do not have proof
to solve crime
human Correct article usage
a crime
judgement
might be useful for these cases
.
To sum up
, Some people believe that Science
is more useful than human judgement
to
solving and Change preposition
in
also
stopping ciriminal
Correct your spelling
criminal
cases
. I partly agree with that because In my opinion
it depends on the Add a comma
opinion,
evidence
. If we have enough evidence
to find out criminal
from his/her Add an article
the criminal
DNA
, Science
may solve whole
Change the article
the whole
case
with
itself. Change preposition
by
However
, Sometimes we do not have enough proof
to solving
these Wrong verb form
solve
cases
by Science
, At that time human judgement
will solve these case
by Fix the agreement mistake
cases
ask
suspects some Change the verb form
asking
psyhclogical
questions.Correct your spelling
psychological
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