Science is more useful than human judgement in stopping crime. To what extent do you agree?

Some individuals believe that
Science
is more beneficial than human
judgement
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judgment
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in criminal
cases
. I partly agree with that because If there
are
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is
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DNA
evidences
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evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
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science
may solve the whole
crime
.
However
, sometimes there is no
evidence
and we should trust the Judge's decision.
Science
might be beneficial for stopping crimes. It provides us
real
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with real
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proof
in
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of
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that
crime
case
.
For instance
, If there is no
evidence
such
as
video
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a video
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record or some witness and
also
we just have
a
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the
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hair of somebody. When they check the
DNA
of hair, they may find the criminal with just a hair.
However
, If we find two different hairs in
crime
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a crime
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area and we know that there is one criminal, scientific checks cannot be helpful for us because we have to ask both of these suspects.
Hence
,
Science
can be beneficial If there is
an
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evidence
a piece of evidence
a shred of evidence
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evidence
with
DNA
checks.
Nevertheless
, If we have two or more
proof
it cannot solve the whole
crime
.
On the other hand
, Sometimes we need
to
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apply
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human
judgement
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judgment
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in
cases
. If there are some problems
such
as
lack
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a lack
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of
evidence
or lack of
witness
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witnesses
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. Somebody
have
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has
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to ask suspects some
psyhclogical
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psychological
questions to solve
crime
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the crime
a crime
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.
For example
, Recently ın my neighborhood there was a
case
about
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of
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robbery.
However
, It happened
in
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at
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night
due to
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apply
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that
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and
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nobody saw the criminal. They have two or three suspects and they have to ask them questions
such
as where were you at that time. In the
end
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end,
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some of the
suspect
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suspects
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gives
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gave
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up and
explain
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explained
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his
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the
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whole robbery and he
punished
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is punished
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to
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with
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3 years.
Therefore
, If we do not have
proof
to solve
crime
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a crime
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human
judgement
might be useful for these
cases
.
To sum up
, Some people believe that
Science
is more useful than human
judgement
to
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in
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solving and
also
stopping
ciriminal
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criminal
cases
. I partly agree with that because In my
opinion
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opinion,
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it depends on the
evidence
. If we have enough
evidence
to find out
criminal
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the criminal
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from his/her
DNA
,
Science
may solve
whole
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the whole
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case
with
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by
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itself.
However
, Sometimes we do not have enough
proof
to
solving
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solve
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these
cases
by
Science
, At that time human
judgement
will solve these
case
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cases
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by
ask
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asking
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suspects some
psyhclogical
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psychological
questions.
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