The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data based on the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 given certain periods between 1970 and 2000 was shown in those charts.
Overall
, it is clear from the graphs that, 1970 was the maximum
while
2000 was the minimum for males and females aged 60-64 in employment.
According to
the first table ,
Japan
had 85 % in 1970
while
jumped down to 74% in 2000.
Likewise
, the huge increase belonged to Belgium which started at 79% and dropped to 19% a given certain periods.
Also
, the number of guys aged 60-64 employed went down for Belgium, the USA,
Japan
and Australia between 1979 and 2000.
On the other hand
, ladies aged 60-64 in employed
Japan
was the highest
while
Belgium was the lowest. Australia started at 165 and jumped up to 18%.
However
,
Japan
began at 43% and fell down 40% which was still above all of them in a specific term.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • percentage
  • trend
  • significant change
  • overall employment
  • societal changes
  • economic conditions
  • government policies
  • compare
  • highlight
  • individual country analysis
  • increased/decreased
  • similarities and differences
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