The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.

The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The given table compares the global sales of different types of digital
games
between 2000 and 2006.
Overall
, the different types of
games
are increasing yearly. At
first,
Handheld and Console
games
are the most common kind of
games
, but in the end, Online and Handheld
games
are starting to increase. In 2000, there were only Handhelds and Console
games
and they were selling for about 6 dollars and around 10 dough, respectively.
Then
, Online
games
were adding
this
list at nearly 2 dollars in 2001. Regarding Mobile phone
games
, it was
also
added to
this
list in 2002 for just over 3 cabbage and Online
games
were
also
the same with it. After 2004, compared to 2002 and 2003, sales of all of them almost doubled. Afterward, in 2005 and 2006 all of the types of
games
were increasing compared to before.
In addition
, the Handheld
games
were always in first place in terms of sales at the beginning at almost 11 cabbage and at the ending at around 18 dough.
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