The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
The line chart displays the unemployed people's percentage in
United
States and Japan between Correct article usage
the United
march
1993 and Capitalize word
March
march
1999.
Capitalize word
March
Overall
, America's unemployment rate
gradually decreased over the time period. In contrast
with
Japan's Change preposition
apply
unemployed
people's Replace the word
unemployment
rate
which
increased steadily.
The United Correct pronoun usage
apply
States'
unemployment percentage started at a higher Correct your spelling
States
rate
of 7.0 percent
in 1993Change the spelling
per cent
,
and gradually decreased until it reached approximately under 5.5% in Remove the comma
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March
1995. After that, it remained relatively stable for one more year. Then
, the rate
of unemployed individuals began to decline consistently year on year until it reached just above 4.0% in March
1999.
Japan's unemployed workforce began the time period at a lower rate
with just nearly above 2.0 percent
, and it went up to 3.5% in nearly Change the spelling
per cent
March
1996. Then
, the rate
of unemployed workforce fluctuated between 3.0% and 3.5% from March
1996 to March
1998. After that, there is
a significant increase in the number of people who did not have jobs until it reached its highest point at approximately Wrong verb form
was
above
4.5%.Change preposition
apply
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