You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
Firstly
, there are many steps for coal to become energy. Such
as the steaming process
and the removal of the CO2 mercury sulfur. So the process
of how energy is produced from coal is quite complicated but I will try to make it as easy as I can start with the most important and main parts
there are 5 main parts
in the process
firstly
the raw syngas
, the removal, electricity, heat recovery and finally
furnace. Moving on , to the purpose of those parts
the removal removes the CO2 mercury sulfur, purified syngas
and also
the raw syngas
you may wonder why is the raw syngas
one of the most important elements hence
, it would get removed in the removal process
. The short answer would be that we need the syngas
to be in the raw form any other form would not work as well as
the raw form. Lastly
, we did not cover the whole process
we only covered as we said the most important parts
, in the future we will talk more deeply about it.Submitted by alaanoudaltammaami on
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