You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
Firstly
, there are many steps for coal to become energy.
Such
as the steaming
process
and the removal of the CO2 mercury sulfur. So the
process
of how energy is produced from coal is quite complicated but I will try to make it as easy as I can start with the most important and main
parts
there are 5 main
parts
in the
process
firstly
the raw
syngas
, the removal, electricity, heat recovery and
finally
furnace. Moving on , to the purpose of those
parts
the removal removes the CO2 mercury sulfur, purified
syngas
and
also
the raw
syngas
you may wonder why is the raw
syngas
one of the most important elements
hence
, it would get removed in the removal
process
. The short answer would be that we need the
syngas
to be in the raw form any other form would not work
as well as
the raw form.
Lastly
, we did not cover the whole
process
we only covered as we said the most important
parts
, in the future we will talk more deeply about it.
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