You are unhappy with a service you received at a restaurant. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: - Describe the situation. - Explain why you were unhappy. - Suggest what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a recent dining experience at your restaurant.
It was my birthday
last
Sunday and my girlfriend and I were there to celebrate it. I booked table number 5 near the window of the first floor because I knew due to
the weekend, tables could be unavailable for an instant booking. Unfortunately, my special day was not as wonderful as I expected.
Despite a prior booking, we had to wait for two hours which was annoying. At last
, when we got to the table, not only was the food served half-cooked but also
the cutlery was stinky like it was not washed properly. We did not enjoy the food at all and all these things ruined my birthday completely.
Hence
, It would be appreciable if you check out the scheduled booking personally so that no customer has to wait for so long. Moreover
, the taste of your food is one of the best things about your restaurant so please do not compromise it on weekends. The main chef should check it before serving it.
I hope you will consider my suggestions and work accordingly
.
Yours faithfully,
Jacob BrownSubmitted by Mrjit147 on
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task achievement
While the core message is clear, adding more details about the inconvenience caused by waiting for two hours can provide a stronger impact.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure is well-maintained, making it easy to follow the flow from describing the situation to suggesting solutions.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, enhancing readability and comprehension.
task achievement
The response covers all the necessary points required in the prompt, ensuring a complete answer to the task.
task achievement
The tone is polite and formal, appropriate for writing to a restaurant manager.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used, adding to the formal structure of the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite