You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in millions from the

who went abroad and those that came to the

between 1979 and 1999,

while

the bar chart shows which countries were the most popular for

residents to visit in 1999.

Overall

, it can be seen that visits to and from the

increased

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and that France was the most popular country to go to.

To begin

, the number of visits abroad by

residents was higher than for those that came to the

, and

this

remained so throughout the period. The figures started at a similar amount, around 10

million

, but visits abroad increased significantly to over 50

million

whereas

the number of overseas residents rose steadily to reach just under 30

million

. By far the most popular

countries

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to visit in 1999

were

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France

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approximately 11

million

visitors, followed by Spain at 9

million

. The USA, Greece, and Turkey were far less popular at around 4, 3 and 2

million

visitors respectively.

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Overall Band Score

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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170 words

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