In the future, people may no longer be able to pay things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?
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people
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payments
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may transfer
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transferred
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.
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To begin
with, using cards is a trend in the world. Linking Words
People
prefer to Use synonyms
phone
or Wrong verb form
phones
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card
when they pay for items. Digital Fix the agreement mistake
cards
payments
offer so many advantages Use synonyms
such
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easy
, quick, Change preposition
as easy
speed
and one does not need to carry any cashiers. Correct word choice
and speed
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platform represents that, Linking Words
people
do not need to wait for change which is the biggest problem in Azerbaijani stores. Use synonyms
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to protect
money
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lose
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money
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of money
any
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for any
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payments
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which
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with which
people
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money
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it
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apply
uses
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use
people
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money
or coins. One reason is a lot of Use synonyms
people
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card
system which they had really Use synonyms
bax
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experiences
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were
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of
money
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is
this
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money
. Use synonyms
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to
them now. Change preposition
for
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Thus
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This
card
system is powerless against them.
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payments
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while
it belongs to the personality. If they can protect and control their Linking Words
card
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that is
wonderful to use. Obviously, modern life is not ready to be online Linking Words
payments
for everyone. It does not matter how you pay be sure you do Use synonyms
this
process with your own budget.Linking Words
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