The pie chart illustrates the proportion of visitors to different types of tourist locations in two years: 1981 and 1999 of the UK.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of
visitors
to different types of tourist locations in two
years: 1981 and 1999 of the UK.
Overall
, it is clear that
the tourist attraction that attracts the most visitors
are museums and Galleries in both two
years. Besides
, wildlife parks
and zoos are the least amazing locations.
First of all, we can see that museums and Galleries, theme parks
were two
tourist attractions which had the most people visiting in both 1981 and 1999. Museums occupied about 48 percent of the number of visitors
in 1981: however
, in 1999 this
location had less people than 1981 about 10%. Besides
, in theme parks
were opposite, in 1999, this
field had more visitors
than about 5% compared with 1981.
On the one hand, two
domains occupied the lowest percentage in two
years were Historic houses and wildlife parks
. In which, historic houses and monuments had the same percentage as 16 percent in both 1981 and 1999. Nevertheless
, in 1999, wildlife parks
were the location that had the number of visitors
higher than 1981 about 5%.Submitted by document.hanie on
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