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The three pie charts illustrate how many hours spent in a library by undergraduate and postgraduates compared to the total student population at a university in Britain.

The three pie charts illustrate how many hours spent in a library by undergraduate and postgraduates compared to the total student population at a university in Britain.
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The pie charts given illustrate how the amount of time spent in a
library
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 varied across
students
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 who haven't graduated, those who have a degree and are studying for one more, and the total of all
students
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 in a British university.
Overall
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, if we take the three groups in combination,
it is clear that
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 most undergraduates spend 1 to 7
hours
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 in the
library
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,
whereas
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 a majority of postgraduates spend much more time, with one half having more than 15
hours
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 spent in the
library
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. As far as undergraduates are concerned, most of them spend from 1 to 7
hours
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 in the
library
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, with
this
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 category taking up 63%, followed by 28% of undergraduates spending 8 to 14
hours
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 and the rest having more than 15
hours
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 of
library
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 time. Regarding
students
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 who are studying for another qualification, more than half of the total spend 15
hours
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 or more in the
library
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, followed closely by 32% of
students
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 taking 8 to 14
hours
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. The rest of them spend about 1 to 7
hours
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.
This
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 leads to an average percentage of exactly half of all
students
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 spending 1 to 7
hours
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 hitting the book,
while
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 the 8 to 14 section follows with only a small gap at 35% and the remaining at 17%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, students, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • undergraduate
  • postgraduate
  • time brackets
  • library usage
  • total student population
  • correlation
  • patterns
  • comparison
  • study level
  • time spent
  • academic demands
  • research intensity
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