The graph below shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#consumers #expenditure #cell #phone #fixed-line #services #america #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The line illustrates customers’ average annual spend on smartphones, national and international
fixed-line
and services
in America over a period of 9 years.
It is clear that
,
Remove the comma
apply
Cell
phone
services
increased between 2001 and 2009.By
contrast
National Add a comma
contrast,
fixed-line
saw decreasing amount of spending.The international fixed-line
services
remained relatively stable.
According to
the graph,Cell
phone
service started at 200$ kept
Correct word choice
and kept
this
growth trend by 2002 surpassed
international fixed-line
in 2006 maintained increasing exceed from National fixed line by 2010 reached
over 700 USD
Conversely
, National fixed-line
service was the main expenditure for users which was 700 USD
, but it ended at 400 USD
in 2010. The mean annual spending of international fixed-line
services
was half that of cell
phone
services
and remained at 300 USD
for the rest of the period.
In 2006, both cell
phone
services
and national fixed-line
services
had the same amount of expense at 500 USD
. International fixed-line
services
saw only a small rise to approximately 330 USD
by 2003, then
dropped to 300 USD
.Submitted by roozbehkh88 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words fixed-line, services, cell, phone, usd with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
▼