The bar chart showed the percentage of school children learning to play four different musical instruments (violin, guitar, piano, drums) in 3 years 2005, 2010, 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented bar chart illustrates ratios of four different musical instruments which are Vialine,

Guitar

,

Piano

and

Drums

used by a particular school

pupils

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during 2005, 2010 and 2015.

It is clear that

,

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preference

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the preference

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of

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Piano

and

Guitar

has been gradually increasing during the mentioned years

while

consent

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the consent

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of being mature in

Drums

has

sightly

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slightly

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declined. Looking at the bar chart in more detail, we can see, In

first

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decade, the

Piano

is the famous practice item in the particular school. By comparing the latest year, The tendency has changed to

Guitar

.

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to that, all the instruments utilization

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as

same

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while

despite the minor consent of

Drums

practice.

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, in 2015,

Piano

and

Drums

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studies

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rapidly climbed by recording 40% and

other

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the other

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two instruments

has

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reported

lower

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rate which almost 10%. It needs to be highlighted that over the

last

years

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, the

practicing

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practising

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preference

of

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Piano

and

Guitar

has remained

same

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the same

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besides

excluding minor changes.