The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. In 1990, the UK was most populated with teenagers aged 15 to 19 with just above 26%. Following slightly behind the data mentioned before, it is age 0 to 4, just below 26%. The country was least populated by

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aged 10 to 14 and 5 to 9, approximately 23% and 25% respectively,

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, the group of 0-4 had been declining since 1992 becoming the lowest in 2001 at roughly 23%.

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15 to 19 had an exponential decrease for 4 years, reaching an all-time low in 1994 at 23%.

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10 to 14 years old had been experiencing an upward slope from 1990 to 2001. Despite being the lowest in 1990 at 23%, it took the first spot in 2001 with a staggering 26%.

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10-14 had overtaken the first spot in 2001 and

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0-4 who was the second place in 1990 had fallen to

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place in 2001.

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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems and state what do you think is better?

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