The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words
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The line graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. In 1990, the UK was most populated with teenagers aged 15 to 19 with just above 26%. Following slightly behind the data mentioned before, it is age 0 to 4, just below 26%. The country was least populated by
groups
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aged 10 to 14 and 5 to 9, approximately 23% and 25% respectively,
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, the group of 0-4 had been declining since 1992 becoming the lowest in 2001 at roughly 23%.
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,
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15 to 19 had an exponential decrease for 4 years, reaching an all-time low in 1994 at 23%.
Groups
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10 to 14 years old had been experiencing an upward slope from 1990 to 2001. Despite being the lowest in 1990 at 23%, it took the first spot in 2001 with a staggering 26%.
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10-14 had overtaken the first spot in 2001 and
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0-4 who was the second place in 1990 had fallen to
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place in 2001.
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