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The graph below shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph below illustrates people’s average annual expenditure on cell phones. global and national
fixed-line
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 and
services
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 in USE from 2001 to 2010.
Overall
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, it can be seen that cell phone
services
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 had trends increased
while
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 international
fixed-line
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services
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 and national
fixed-line
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services
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 patterns plummeted. Looking at the line diagram in detail, cell phone service opened at $200 in 2001 and
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 it has grown to $300 in 2002. After that, it rose dramatically from 2003 to 2007 at $600. And
then
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 it remains stable until 2008. After that, it rose sharply until the end of 2010 at approximately $702. Regarding the data tendencies diminished, national
fixed-line
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services
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 began at $700 in 2001 to 2002 at $601. After that, it drops greatly between 2003 and 2010 from $600 to $400
at the end
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 period.
Moreover
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, international fixed-inline
services
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 commenced at about $205 in 2001, it boosted to $301 in 2003.
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it stayed the same until the end of 2004 to 2010 at $300.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fixed-line, services with synonyms.
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