Part 1. The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the percentage of students who play

piano

,

guitar

,

drums

, and

violin

in 2005, 2010, and 2015.

Overall

, the

amount

of students learning musical instruments has increased from 2005 to 2015, except

violin

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. In 2005, only approximately 5 to 10% of school

childrens

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children

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who learn to play

piano

,

guitar

,

drums

, and

violin

. On that note,

drums

were the least favourite instrument to learn for kids. Five years later in 2010,

piano

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the piano

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and

guitar

learners

amount

are skyrocketed to around 20%,

in contrast

with

violin

players

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which

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decreased slightly to under 10%,

nevertheless

,

drums

players number

are stayed

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the same at 5%. In 2015, the number of pianists and guitarists

are

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peaked

to

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at

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roughly 40%,

made

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them into the most favourite instruments to play. Drummers

amount

are

also

rose to just around 10%.

However

,

violin

players

are continuous

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to shrink to only 5% in 2015. In conclusion, the charts

shows

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the

amount

of school kids who learn four different types of instruments in three different years.

Piano

and

guitar

learners

has

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continuously surged over 15 years,

while

violin

showed

the

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declining trend.