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The pie charts show the destination of export goods in three countries in 2010.

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The chart shown provides data on export shipments of three nations
Argentina
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,
Mexico
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 and
Chile
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 to different parts of the world namely
Europe
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, the United
States
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 of America, fellow
Latin
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 American
states
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 and other countries
elsewhere
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 during the period of 2010.
Overall
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, in
Argentina
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 and
Chile
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, much of their goods were sold to
Latin
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 American
states
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while
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 over half of
Mexico
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's sales were marketed to the United
States
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 of America.
To begin
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 with, over half of
Argentina
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's products were either traded off to
Europe
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 or to their fellow
Latin
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 member
states
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, with
Europe
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 getting over a quarter and other
Latin
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 Americans just under two-fifths of the total production
thus
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 26% and 38% respectively.
In contrast
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,
Chile
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's trades were almost fairly matched between the two continents though sales to its counterparts were 1% higher than to
Europe
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as a result
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 were 31% and 30% respectively. With regards to market sales to the United
States
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 and to other parts of the world, goods sold by
Chile
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 were 2% higher as compared to
Argentina
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 with
Chile
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 selling off 18% and 22% contrary to 16% and 20%
accordingly
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.
In addition
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,
Mexico
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 sold 62% of its production to the United
States
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 which was equivalent to just about the products traded to
Europe
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 and its neighbouring nations by
Argentina
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 and
Chile
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.
Furthermore
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,
Mexico
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also
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 exports 6% of the same quantity of goods to
Europe
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, other countries around the globe and its fellow countries.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words argentina, mexico, chile, europe, states, latin with synonyms.
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