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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.

The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.
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The provided diagram illustrates the number of stages to make your writing a book and
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 publishing it.
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 of publishing a book involves 9 stages and 5 main parts
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 as writing, dealing, deciding, binding and distributing . It starts with
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a
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writing and finishes with
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sectioning
 these books to bookshops.
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, individuals who want to publish a book should write a writing,
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that
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, they should send it to publishing houses. These houses
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 that writing by editors. If
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writer
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a writer
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 wants to deal with them,
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writer
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 makes a contract with
publishing
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house
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binding
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 these books.
Publishing
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The publishing
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house
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 organizes the plan of writing with
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writer
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the writer
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.
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writer
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the writer
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 and publishing
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 decide on
layout
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 of
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the writing
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 together. When they decide,
publishing
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the publishing
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house
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 print that writing. These prints are
binding
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 in
publish
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the publish
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house
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, these books are
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distributed
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 to bookshops for
selling it
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sale
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.
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,
this
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 process takes 18 to 24 months.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words writer, house with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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