One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - apologise for missing the birthday celebration; - explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend; - and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry.
Hello
navneet
,
Hope you and your family are doing great. I am writing Change the capitalization
Navneet
this
letter to express sorry as I was unable to join you on your special day. I know you are upset with me because I forget
to mention Wrong verb form
forgot
you
the reason behind my absence. Change preposition
to you
Therefor
, I am writing Correct your spelling
Therefore
this
letter to provide you with the whole details.
The thing is, unfortunately
your celebration date clashed with my Add the comma(s)
unfortunately,
ielts
exam date. As you know,I am working on my residency and for Correct your spelling
IELTS
that
I need high scores Add a comma
that,
in
the Change preposition
on
ielts
examination. So Correct your spelling
IELTS
that is
the reason I missed your birthday bash.
Since,
it is my responsibility to inform you in advance about my absence and I am guilty Remove the comma
apply
for
my mistake. Even I decided to call you in advance but Change the preposition
of
due to
the accident of my car, I stucked
in the repair shop and after that completely Correct your spelling
stuck
forget
to call you.
I hope you Wrong verb form
forgot
wall
understand my situation. Just to cover up Correct your spelling
will
my
absence I Change preposition
for my
sent
you one special gift which Wrong verb form
am sending
helps
you to Wrong verb form
will help
remind
fond of our school memories. Even I planned 2 days trip
to your city to spend quality time with you.
Hope to see you soon and please accept my apology.
Verb problem
remain
Your
faithfully
Arshdeep KaurCorrect the word
Yours
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single idea. This will improve the clarity and coherence of your writing.
task achievement
Consider revising sentences for grammatical accuracy and proper word usage. For example, 'wall understand' should be 'will understand' and 'I stucked' should be 'I was stuck'.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriate and friendly, which suits the context of writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which aids in readability and gives a structured flow.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,