Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, world

systems

such

as communication, medicine, and transportation can not work unless using computer technology. Looking closer,

humans

has

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relied on

computers

more actively than ages ago which could cause detrimental impacts.

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essay will discuss the pros and cons

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this

statement. Despite the dependence,

computers

indeed make the

life

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lives

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of

humans

more

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easier. All

systems

data

were

build

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since the discovery of

computers

,

for instance

, the railway network for trains, medicine saving database for

hospital

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hospitals

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, and the disclosure of email which

one

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is one

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of many communication forms that

used

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are used

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worldwide.

Computers

create a tracking system that

convenient

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is convenient

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for

the

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wide range of

data

, actively reducing the work time for employees to do trivial tasks

while

they can focus on a greater deal ahead. In spite of all the advantages,

cyber

security is one thing that people should be aware of. In

this

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present

days

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day

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,

cyber

attack

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attacks

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such

as hacking, network hijacking, and

cyber

terrorism are common to occur. Not only these crimes will cause

the

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apply

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disruptions

of

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systems

,

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, but

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there are

also

the

consequence

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consequences

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of the loss of sensitive

informations

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information

pieces of information

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or

data

. Commonly,

cyber

attack

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attacks

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would

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apply

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expose

the

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apply

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computers

with

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to

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virus

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viruses

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and

makes

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make

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it

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them

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stop working. With the

shut down

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of the main

computers

, crucial

systems

such

as public trams, health tracking for medicines, and communication between

humans

can not continue.

Thus

, the downsides of

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computers

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dependence befall.

This

threat actually

happen

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in Indonesia, when a group of hackers succeed in hacking the main database program of the

cyber

security authority.

Accordingly

, all the flight checking

in

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the airports

were

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was

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delayed and all the sensitive

data

of Indonesia's residents

were

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was

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stolen. The catastrophe intensity reached to

nation

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level. In conclusion,

although

computers

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computer

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technology

have

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the upper hand

for

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the globe's

systems

,

humans

can not just depend on it without caring about its possible drawbacks.

Hence

, it is vital to establish a tight security system to protect the

computers

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computer

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network from

cyber

threats.