You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company In your letter • Introduce yourself • Explain the situation • Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear sir or madam
Iʼm
writing about your Correct your spelling
I
company
for a
some problems. I Remove the article
apply
have
bought Unnecessary verb
apply
new
Add an article
a new
camera
from your company
but when i
got home I found some problems. I returned the new Change the capitalization
I
camera
and spoke to the company
representative a week ago however
the camera
has still not been repaired. I was so angry about it.
I really need camera
right now because after three days I will take Correct article usage
a camera
trip
and Add an article
a trip
the trip
i
need Change the capitalization
I
good
quality Add an article
a good
the good
camera
. Iʼm
not satisfied Correct your spelling
I
about
your Change preposition
with
company
. Because your company
makes me laugh. You sold me camera
that didn't work well before, and now you don't fix the Add an article
a camera
the camera
camera
and return it. What can you think of this
?
I request the company
to repair and return my camera
to me as soon as possible. If not send me a new camera
with no problem. Of
you don't fix the problem within a day, I will have to file a complaint against your Correct your spelling
If
company
.
Your
faithfully
JasminaCorrect the word
Yours
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suitable writing tone
Ensure to maintain a consistent and polite tone throughout the letter. Using expressions like 'your company makes me laugh' can be perceived as unprofessional.
complete response
Include more specific details about the camera and the problems encountered. This provides clarity and helps convey the seriousness of the issue.
complete response
The letter efficiently introduces the purpose of the writing and the situation experienced.
greeting and closing
The closing of the letter is clear and makes a direct request for action.