The maps below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate have plants of public
park
has transformed between 1920 and today .
Fix the agreement mistake
parks
Overall
, it is obvious that public park
Fix the agreement mistake
parks
has
undergone Correct subject-verb agreement
have
a major alterations
during a period of time, becoming more crowded and Correct the article-noun agreement
major alterations
a major alteration
modernize
it Wrong verb form
modernised
and
less green space now.
As for the general structure of Correct word choice
apply
provided
map in 1920, it was more green with a huge fountain in the middle part of the Correct article usage
the provided
park
, followed with
Change preposition
by
stage
for musicians Add an article
a stage
the stage
in
the left. In the left up and down corner of the map, there were seats and rose gardens. Change preposition
on
Entrance
Fix the agreement mistake
Entrances
also
were available in the north and south with pond
for water plants.
Currently, there Fix the agreement mistake
ponds
was
so many changes in Grange Wrong verb form
are
Park
. Rose garden cycled with seats andCorrect article usage
an
amphitheater
for concerts take place of fountain and stage for musicians.Change the spelling
amphitheatre
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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