The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides information about the
population
of age
group
in New Zealand between 2011 to 2012.
Overall
, In
2011 shows an increase in all ages than 2012. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, the percentage of the changes for total ages is above 0.6%.
According to
data children under 15 were gently decreased from 2011 to 2012 around -0.2%.
On the other hand
, the age
group
15-39 had the same changed
in Replace the word
change
group
under 15.The Add an article
the group
a group
age
group
from 40 to 46 hitting
a high point Wrong verb form
hit
about
+0.6%, Change preposition
of about
shows
Wrong verb form
showing
in
people Change preposition
that
in
Change preposition
of
this
age
had the highest population
of
Change preposition
in
new
Zealand. Capitalize word
New
Furthermore
, the
people in
Change preposition
aged
age
65 and older had the lowest number for
Change preposition
in
population
, Correct article usage
the population
however
, table
clearly shows Add an article
the table
suddenly
Change the word
sudden
rieas
from 2011 to 2012. Correct your spelling
rises
A round
Correct article usage
Round
of
half the Change preposition
apply
population
of New Zealand in
Add a missing verb
is in
age
Add an article
the age
group
15 to 39 years old. Then
became after
this
the people in age
40 to 64 years old.Submitted by modhialarjani1999 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, age, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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