The charts below illustrate which of 3 fast food restaurants were the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below illustrate which of 3 fast food restaurants were the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the preferences (in percentages) of three fast food of young people in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and an estimation of 2027.
Overall
,
while
young people from Vietnam varied their preference for
Burger
King and
McDonald’s
over the 10-year period, Indonesian teenagers preferred
McDonald’s
over the other two fast food options. Vietnamese teenagers chose
Burger
King over
McDonald’s
in 2017 with a small difference of just around 9%.
However
, it is predicted an occurrence of a turning point in 2027 in which
McDonald’s
will lead the preferences with a slight rise to 57.4%,
while
Burger
King experience a modest drop to 39%.
Whereas
, KFC kept low percentages throughout the period, with 4.1% in 2017, and an estimation of a small increase of 6.3% in 2027.
In contrast
, young people from Indonesia showed a decreased estimation of McDonald's preference, because it began being the primary choice in 2017 with 60.8%, but
afterward
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, it is estimated to drop to 48.5% in 2027. Meanwhile, KFC showed a significant rise of around 16% over the years, beginning with only 23.8% in 2017,
then
predicting
to
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an increase to the second position with 39.2% in 2027.
Moreover
,
Burger
King remained the
last
choice in both years, with 15.4% in 2017 and with a prediction of 12.3% in 2027.
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