The charts below illustrate which of 3 fast food restaurants were the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the preferences (in percentages) of three fast food of young people in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and an estimation of 2027.

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young people from Vietnam varied their preference for

Burger

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King and

McDonald’s

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over the 10-year period, Indonesian teenagers preferred

McDonald’s

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over the other two fast food options. Vietnamese teenagers chose

Burger

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King over

McDonald’s

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in 2017 with a small difference of just around 9%.

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, it is predicted an occurrence of a turning point in 2027 in which

McDonald’s

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will lead the preferences with a slight rise to 57.4%,

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Burger

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King experience a modest drop to 39%.

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, KFC kept low percentages throughout the period, with 4.1% in 2017, and an estimation of a small increase of 6.3% in 2027.

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, young people from Indonesia showed a decreased estimation of McDonald's preference, because it began being the primary choice in 2017 with 60.8%, but

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, it is estimated to drop to 48.5% in 2027. Meanwhile, KFC showed a significant rise of around 16% over the years, beginning with only 23.8% in 2017,

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an increase to the second position with 39.2% in 2027.

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Burger

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King remained the

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choice in both years, with 15.4% in 2017 and with a prediction of 12.3% in 2027.

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The charts below illustrate which of 3 fast food restaurants were the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people say it is important to keep your home and work place tidy with everything organized and in the correct places. What is your opinion about it?

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others offer free entry. In my opinion, the benefits of free admission outweigh the drawbacks.

some people believe that professional such as doctors and engineers should work in the country where they did their training. Other believe that they should be free to work in another country they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.