The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The bar chart
depict
the general student at 3 Change the verb form
depicts
university
.
Change to a plural noun
universities
University
of Riverview has the biggest namber
of Correct your spelling
number
students
. Firstly
, India has between 7000 and 8000 students
at University
of Riverview . Correct article usage
the University
Secondly
, Nepal has 5000 students
at it . Moreover
, 4000 students
in Vietnam . In addition
, from 1000 to 2000 in Indonesia . Colombia has student ander
1000 .
India has 5000 at Correct your spelling
and
Earlwood
University
and 6000 on
Smithtown Change preposition
at
University
. Also
, both Earlwood
and Smithtown University
have 4000 students
in Nepal . Beside
Replace the word
Besides
to
, Vietnam has 2000 at Change preposition
apply
University
of Smithtown and 3000 at Correct article usage
the University
University
of Correct article usage
the University
Earlwood
. Indonesia has at both of these Universities 1000 . Finally
, there are 1000 at University
of Correct article usage
the University
Earlwood
and below 1000 at other University
.
Fix the agreement mistake
Universities
To conclude
, there are many universities around the world and numbers
of people will be Correct article usage
the numbers
diffrent
between the universities .Correct your spelling
different
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university, students, earlwood with synonyms.
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