You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter • introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club •ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs Begin as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
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Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing regarding a
college
sports
club
near my home.
First,
let me introduce myself. My name is Ezoza. I am currently studying at a prestigious college
in
the city of tashkent
. I have been studying here since Change the capitalization
Tashkent
last
week. I am very interested in sports
, but this
College
does not do what I want. Furthermore
, there is a sports
club
at the college
where I study.
of influential families come there. I think the price of this
sports
club
is very expensive. I am very interested in this
club
. I really wanted to join this
club
and decided to talk to my family about it. And my family agreed to let me Join the club
. I paid $400 to join this
club
. In fact, the reason I was interested in the club
was to make more friends and exchange ideas with children of high-ranking families. But when I went to the club
, there was not much sports
equipment. There was only a treadmill, a bow, rackets, and balls. Students come to the sports
club
to restore their health and figure. Children of low-ranking people rarely visit the sports
club
because not all of them can afford to pay. I went to this
club
one day, and I did not like it that much, in my opinion. I did not like this
club
, so I stopped going there and got my money back. I have questions for the management of the sports
club
. Firstly
, why is there so little sports
equipment? Secondly
, why is this
club
so expensive?
Thirdly
, where is it here that the children of influential families visit?
Yours sincerely
EzozaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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coherence cohesion
Try to organize your letter more logically, ensuring that one idea flows smoothly to the next. This will help improve the overall readability of your letter.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. This will make your writing clearer and easier to follow.
task achievement
Provide more details about your interest in the sports club and break down the issues and questions more clearly. This will help to achieve better task response.
suitable writing tone
Adopt a slightly more formal and polite tone, especially when asking questions and discussing sensitive topics.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used and politely framed.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.