You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » You should write at least 150 words.
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These two charts give a comparison
on
what Change preposition
of
energy consuming
household items Add a hyphen
energy-consuming
are use
, and how much Change the verb form
are used
greenhouse
gas
is produced from those items. from the first chart
we can see that "other appliances" are the most used, but from the second chart, it is a surprise to say that it is not the thing that produces the most Add a comma
chart,
greenhouse
gas
, in fact, it's not even second.
The category that produces the most greenhouse
gas
in Australia is actually heating and cooling, even though it's only the third when it comes to consuming energi
. Correct your spelling
energy
On the other hand
, the accumulative "other appliances" category uses the most energy
but only comes third in producing greenhouse
gas
.
From these two charts, we can conclude that the amount of Fix the agreement mistake
gases
energy
consumed by a certain group of household piece
doesn't always correspond to the Fix the agreement mistake
pieces
greenhouse
gas
produced by said group. We can see this
by the fact that in
the chart, Change preposition
apply
it
states that the thing that consumes the most Correct pronoun usage
apply
energy
doesn't produce the most greenhouse
gas
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, greenhouse, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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