The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » You should write at least 150 words.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» You should write at least 150 words.
The first chart illustrates the percentages of 7 different uses of household energy in Australia (water heating, cooking,
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, lighting, refrigeration, heating and cooling, and other appliances) whilst the second chart shows the percentages of
greenhouse
gas
produced by the 7 uses.
Firstly
, the
greenhouse
gas
produced from heating and cooling has a significant dominance
in contrast
to other uses.
Greenhouse
gas
produced and household energy used from
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has the least impact. Lighting, refrigeration and cooking
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the next
least
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lowest
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percentages after
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.
Whereas
water heating and other appliances still hold second and third place for both charts with about less than a quarter. Heating and cooling produced 38% of the total
greenhouse
gas
in Australia but not as much in household
enegry
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energy
use with only 20%.
Stand by
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has the
least
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lowest
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percentage with only 4% and 5% on the two charts. From the two charts, it can be seen that water heating has about the same proportion of energy use and
greenhouse
gas
produced
with
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23% and 25%.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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