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The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The table chart illustrates how the
population
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rate
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 changed in
Australia
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 and
Malaysia
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 between 1980 and 2002. Looking at the graph, the percentage of the total
population
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 was by far the highest in
Malaysia
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, with the opposite being true for average annual
population
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 growth in
Australia
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. As far as the total
population
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 in
Australia
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 is concerned, the proportion of the total people was 14.7% in 1980 and increased slightly to 19.6% in 2002.
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, the
rate
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 for
Malaysia
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 was 13.7% in 1980, going up to 24.3% in 2002. The male
population
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 was 49.9% in 1980 and remained unchanged in 2002.
In contrast
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,
Malaysia
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 experienced 50.3% in 1980 and rose slowly to 50.6% in 2002. When it comes to the female
population
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, they were the second-largest
population
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 among others with a
rate
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 was 50.1% in 1980, staying the same in 2002.
Furthermore
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, in
Malaysia
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, individuals did not change significantly with 49.7% in 1980, decreasing steadily to 49.4 in 2002. Birth
rate
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 and average annual
population
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 growth were the lowest populations during the period, being just under 2%, aged over 65% society was at 9.6% in 1980 in
Australia
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, peaking at 12.4% in 2002 but
Malaysia
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 was lower than the former.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, rate, australia, malaysia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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