The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The graph below illustrates the process of how rainwater is collected and
then
processed for use as drinking
water
in an Australian city. First of all, the
rain
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rainwater
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water
is mined in deep pits underground and
then
carried to the
water
filter, one of the main stages of
this
process and there are 4 steps.
Furthermore
, it is carried along through the pipes in storage where it will be saved for a
while
.
Therefore
, adding chemicals will be in the next steps. At the next stages of the process, harmful substances like carbon dioxide, mercury and sulfur are removed.
Subsequently
, the liquid
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transfer
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to the
water
treatment
afterwards
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in
this
phase drinking liquid will be purified and various chemicals will be added.
As a result
, after going through all these processes when drinking
water
is turned on, it will be ready for use.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rainwater harvesting
  • rooftops
  • drains and gutters
  • underground storage tanks
  • water treatment plant
  • purification
  • filtration
  • chemical treatment
  • impurities
  • microorganisms
  • distribution system
  • potable water
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